Better my essay? ?
Facebook is a social networking website launched on February 4, 2004.Founded by Mark Zuckerberg while he was a student at Harvard University. The website’s name comes from the paper facebooks depicting members of a campus community that some colleges give to new students, faculty, and staff as a way to get to know other people on campus. At first website membership was limited to Harvard students, but was expanded to other colleges in the Ivy League. It later expanded further to include any university student, then high school students, and, finally, to anyone aged 13 and over. The website currently has more than 100 million active users worldwide and averages 250 million hits every day.
They are free, easy to join, and easy to message its members. Teenagers chat about everything from school, to sports, to what they were doing last night. It all seems like innocent fun, and it can be. But many teens are unaware there are hidden dangers of social networking sites. Usually, we have to meet a person to find out what they look like, what their interests are, or to just figure out what kind of person they are. But by using Social Networking Sites, such as Facebook, you can learn all about pretty much anyone just by going on the internet. The only fault of Social Networking Sites is that the information that you receive may not be true.
Some students are now finding themselves in trouble after parents, teachers, and employers view these sites. College students are being expelled from school after posting pictures of what they do over the weekend. High school students are being disciplined when they express themselves in their personal blogs. Since the popularity of these sites has increased, we have also seen an increase in the number of rapes, kidnappings, and murders due to these popular social networking sites. Students often do not realize that the things they post on the Internet will stick around for years. The immediate consequences seem trivial when you consider the amount of students who will have student loans to pay off but will not be able to because they cannot obtain a job due to the party blogs and pictures on their social networking sites from their glorious college days.
There is no pretending that we are all not aware of the many social networking sites on the Internet today. Regardless of what they’re being used for, there is no doubt the online addiction they have caused. Along with television, instant messaging, and cell phones it’s safe to say that the Facebook and MySpace are by far the biggest procrastination tool amongst college students, and therefore they are becoming a problem. Facebook allows you to stay in touch with old friends but how much information is too much? We have to be careful about what we put up on the internet of ourselves because you never know how could be lurking around.

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Ill answer in bullet points for you because it is easier to understand than a long waffle.
Write an introduction to what you are doing
Like…My essay is going to be based on…..the reason I chose to do this was because…….
Paragraph one
- Try not to copy and paste from Wikipedia, I did it for my work and I failed, put it in your own words as much as you possibly can.
I thought the rest was brilliant!
Just close with a conclusion of something like what you think of what you found and what you could have done to better your work etc.
GL and well done
Facebook is a social networking website launched on February 4, 2004, founded by Mark Zuckerberg while he was a student at Harvard University. The website’s name comes from the paper Facebook depicting members of a campus community that some colleges give to new students, faculty, and staff, as a way to get to know other people on campus. At first, website membership was limited to Harvard students, but was expanded to other colleges in the Ivy League. Facebook later expanded further to include any university student, then came high school students, and, finally, to anyone ages 13 and over. The website currently has more than 100 million active users worldwide and averages 250 million hits every day.
They are free, easy to join, and easy to message their members. Teenagers chat about everything from school, to sports, to what they were doing last night. All these great topics seem like innocent fun, and it can be. But many teens are unaware there are hidden dangers of social networking sites. Usually, we have to meet a person to find out what they look like, what their interests are, or to just figure out what kind of person they are. By using Social Networking Sites, such as Facebook, you can learn about pretty much anyone just by going on the internet. The only fault of Social Networking Sites is the information you receive may not be true.
Some students are now finding themselves in trouble after parents, teachers, and employers view these sites. College students are being expelled from school after posting pictures of what they do over the weekend. High school students are being disciplined when they express themselves in their personal blogs. Since the popularity of these sites has increased, we have also seen an increase in the number of rapes, kidnappings, and murders due to these popular social networking sites. Students often do not realize the things they post on the Internet will stick around for years. The immediate consequences seem trivial when you consider the amount of students who will have student loans to pay off, but will not be able to because they cannot obtain a job due to party blogs and pictures on their social networking sites from their glorious college days.
There is no pretending we are all not aware of the many social networking sites on the Internet today. Regardless of what they are being used for today, there is no doubt the internet has caused online addiction to many teenagers . Along with television, instant messaging, and cell phones, these items are safe to say Facebook and MySpace are by far the biggest procrastination tool amongst college students, and therefore they are becoming a problem. Facebook allows you to stay in touch with old friends, but how much information is too much? We have to be careful about what we put up on the internet of ourselves because you never know who could be lurking around.